Then he went on to give translated versions of Sanskrit sayings he must know by heart, and gave a message which could be summarized as saying, “Be good, and trust in God; He will see you through.” That is a perfectly good message; it would have been fine in a meeting of Indic believers. It is not the subject I would have chosen to speak to senior representatives of 180 diverse countries about. The prime minister was preceded by King Tupou VI of Tonga and President Prosper Bazombanza of Burundi, and followed by the prime minister of Fiji and foreign ministers of Germany, Russia and China; his speech must have gone entirely over their heads. Modi also spoke at length about hoary old topics dear to Indians – development, poverty removal, industrialization, infrastructure, environment and so on. I do not know how well he succeeded, but it was a speech eminently designed to put his audience to sleep. If anyone stayed awake, he must have thought, “Not another boring Indian!”
More important, he missed the chance to convey anything of strategic national interest. For instance, he could have mentioned the resolution of the problem of enclaves with Bangladesh, and thanked Sheikh Hasina, who spoke after him; he could have thanked Josaia Bainimarama for making him feel at home in Fiji, and appreciated its rainbow of races living together.
He said that while the world spoke of the private and public sectors, India had defined a new personal sector of individual enterprise, microenterprise and microfinance, drawing on the strength of digital and mobile applications. This is confused thinking; all these are part of the private sector. And the government did not create this sector; it emerged in the days of licence permit raj to evade controls, and continues to survive because of its low wages.
Indians are prone to boast when they meet foreigners; they like to tell them what a great country India is and what great things we are doing. They think they are educating foreigners about Indian realities; they do not realize that the foreigners think they are boasting, and that boasts are a speciality of insecure people.
The same prime minister gave a very different kind of speech to the chiefs of information technology companies in San Jose. He began by mentioning his hosts by first name. He was witty – for example, “Google has made teachers less awe-inspiring and grandparents more idle.” He spoke in short and crisp sentences. He spoke with knowledge about social uses of IT. He told arresting stories – for instance, of a patient he saw in Bishkek being treated online by a doctor in Delhi. He was passionate about using technology to change the lives of his people, and spoke in some detail about the IT initiatives of his government. He announced a plan to take the help of Google – a foreign enterprise – and make 500 railway stations wifi hotspots with. And he made a practical proposal – an Indo-US partnership in digitizing India. Not surprisingly, he won over his audience.
The prime minister gave two speeches within the space of a week: the one in the UN was indifferent, the one to IT professionals was masterly. How could he be so bad and so good?
One possibility is that the speech writers were different. This is obvious; even the English of the second talk was so much better. But he did not passively read speeches given to him; both reflected his views. In other words, he chose the message; the speech writers only dressed it up. The difference in quality reflected his thinking.
He obviously holds strong views about Hinduism. He is equally passionate about digitization. The difference was that he gave the first talk to the wrong audience, and the second one to the right audience. He makes good verbal products; that is what has made him a good politician. But surprisingly for a Gujarati, he does not match his products with their markets; and often when he has a ready market, he cannot think of the right product. This is true of Parliament, a perfect field for verbal games; for more than a year he has been largely tongue-tied, and has let the Congress make hay. That is a pity, because democracy is a game of persuasion. The prime minister has proved himself to be a great fighter; he would be ten times more effective if he also tried persuasion.